Dramatis Personae: A 40’s something astronaut and his escape pod, which is now his coffin of sorts.
Setting: Deep space
This poem follows the last few moments of an astronaut on an ill-fated space mission. Out of desperation, he rushed to an escape pod. Due to an explosion of the shuttle, the pod’s trajectory was thrown off course.
Mission control, I’m off course
Were the last words that I spoke
I float in space with no chance of recourse
A victim of fate’s cruel practical joke
Two hours of battery life remains
I smother the hunger pains with my pills
The silence of space so deafening, my mind strains
My lips crack as blood fills
One hour left, as I hear the chime
I press a picture of my family against my lips
Understanding that I am now on borrowed time
Hallucinations from the pills as my mind slips
The time has come, as darkness falls
Desolation is now my bride
The escape pod judders and stalls
Aimlessly through space, I shall glide
The welcoming sight of a black hole
At least the devil won’t get my soul
Let me know what you think!
Thanks for reading!
Travis
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Awesome poem! I was captivated with every word 😋👏
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That’s great! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the encouragement and the support. It’s greatly appreciated! 🤗😁
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Loved your poem! ❤ You’re welcome 😄 Keep up the great work!
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My mind is blown especially for the last few lines! “May be the devil won’t get my soul coz I’m going into the black hole”! Brilliant!💜
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Hehehe! I’m glad you loved it. When I got to the end of the poem the last two lines just flowed so well and they were just so heavy I couldn’t resist! Thank you so much for reading and the kind words. 😁🤗
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Picture was truly painted man
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That’s great to hear that! My goal was to engulf the reader with the emotions of the astronaut. Glad it translated well. Thank you for reading! I appreciate it.
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All good brother
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Engaging and suspenseful with a pleasing pace and flow.
You are a talented writer.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it! Had a lot of fun writing that one. Awe! Thank you so much for the compliment! It means a lot and very encouraging! 🥰😁
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You are most welcome and I am being most sincere. Keep writing and enjoying!
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I truly appreciate it. I aim for quality with the stuff I put together. So you giving me a compliment like that is extremely motivating. It means the world to me. Thank you so much for reading and the feedback. 🤗🥰
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Great lines!!!
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Thank you so much! 😊😁
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(❁´◡`❁)
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A beautifully crafted poem!!
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Thanks for the compliment! I have to say, out of all of the poems I have wrote, I think it’s my favorite. Thanks so much for the support it is greatly appreciated!
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It’s my pleasure. Other poems are also good, but it appealed me most. Thank you.
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Thanks again!
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Superbly done. I like the mention of the black hole and the devil.
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Thank you so much for the compliment! Oh yes, those last two lines wrap up the poem nicely. I couldn’t resist ending it on those lines. I’m glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the support!
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Wow! Awesome!
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Thanks, Eugenia! I really enjoyed putting this one together. I think out of all of the poems I have done, it’s easily one of my favorites. Just the thought of aimlessly floating through space is terrifying.
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It is truly and awesome piece! 😉
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Captivatingly dark, but I’m sure it has happened. I have a hard time watching space movies due to claustrophobia, but I watch them anyway and am so stressed out at the end. This seemed more peaceful in a way. 🙂
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I’m the same way—the sheer terror of being in space with nowhere to go always gives me an unsettling feeling. That’s what I was thinking too when I wrote it. The person knows the end has arrived, so all of the stresses will be gone. Thank you so much for reading and the compliment!
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I could probably get the resolve at that point too, but getting there….never been a good fit. We did go down to Cape Canaveral to see the final flight of Atlantis in 2010 which was amazing.
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That had to be such a amazing experience! I watched on TV. You are so lucky to have been there, once in a lifetime moment.
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It was a once in a lifetime moment because it was the last flight for Atlantis and the second to last flight that ended the Space Shuttle Program. Here is a blog and some pics of it if you want to check it out. I just wrote about it in January. https://oureyesopen.blog/2021/01/07/squares-what-goes-up-must-come-down/
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I just checked it out. Awesome pics! Thanks for sharing that! 😁
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Thanks for checking it out. We go down there a lot for hiking and birding because there is a Wildlife Refuge next to the Cape. We haven’t ever gone down to see a rocket launch though. 🙂
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Really chilling! I love the idea of scifi poetry 🙂
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Thanks Isaac! Glad you liked it. I know, same here! Nothing is off limits with me when it comes to poems, haha. Thanks for reading and the support.
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I wonder how you write beautiful hikus and sometimes this dark poetry? Is there any between the two?
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